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Huáng Lóng Nov 10, 2015 10:32:03 GMT

Post by Deleted on Nov 10, 2015 10:32:03 GMT

Huáng Lóng

Human Life? What's that?

N/A || Female || Bi-Sexual - Heavy Female Preference || 17

APPEARANCE

[Yis]

PERSONALITY

Positives
- Fierce
- Disciplined
- No regard for life
- Sexy
- Insatiable Lust for Blood

Negatives
- Vengeful
- Ruthless
- Quick to Anger
- Loves fighting too much
- Kuudere

Likes
- Blood
- Saki
- Men's Screams of Terror
- Women's Screams of Terror
- Fighting

Dislikes
- Weaklings
- Alcohol that isn't Saki
- Being Defeated (As if that'll ever happen)
- Being Mocked
- Being Goaded

HISTORY

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{Content within is very graphic, Reader discretion is advised.}

The Beginning

Life was normal at first, the generic tale of the common Chinese Family living out their lives in blissful harmony. For Huáng Lóng, all seemed like nothing was amiss. What she didn't know, was that her entire life was by a complete miracle that she was even born in the first place. With china's strict "One Kid Per Family" law, Huáng Lóng shouldn't of been born at all. Her real parents are a mystery for her, though she believes her adopted parents are her birth parents. You see, Huáng Lóng was born in secret and adopted away at birth. Her parents had a kid already and because of the laws, weren't allowed to have another. Huáng Lóng's life has, however, been uneventful since her conception as everyone believes her to be born to her adopted parents. This was... Until the military found out. She had to go in for some blood tests because she'd fallen sick and though the sickness was naught more than the common flu, it was discovered her blood didn't match her 'parents' at all. Because of this, she was taken into custody of the state and her adopted parents... Were never heard from again. Huáng Lóng was given a singular choice, Join the Military or Die. Needless to say, she joined the military. This wasn't a happy 'union' however, and Huáng Lóng tried numerous times to find ways out of this but sadly the only way she found to escape it was to die.

Huáng Lóng has been serving the Military for 12 years by now, having started training when she was naught but 5 years old. Being in the military life for this long makes one begin to forget their past, and at this point Huáng Lóng had almost all but forgotten what it was like to be anything but a murderer. Her... 'powers' were discovered very quickly when one of her drill sergents tried to smack her for 'insubordination', something lashed out at the man and slammed him through a rebar reinforced stone wall. It's not known what hit him, but he was nearly killed by a 5 year old. Huáng Lóng was severely punished for this, despite only being 5 years old... She was mercilessly beaten for this. It caused her to very quickly become submissive towards the Chinese military and her powers went dormant again for many years. It wasn't until she was 12 and her first "mission" was given to her, it was an obvious suicide mission and she was expected to die on it. Nobody knew about her, her adopted parents and real parents were mysterious "MIA" and anyone who knew about her had quickly suffered the same fate. So if she simply died on some mission, nobody would remember her or miss her... She was expendable. Her training had gone remarkably well though she never used guns, she prefered melee, fists... Swords... Daggers. Those kind of things.

Huáng Lóng's first mission was "simple". She was to infiltrate an enemy encampment and kill everyone there in anyway she could, and since she'd been raised practically from birth to kill... She did just that. She was essentially a Robot, pre-programmed to disregard human life and kill without mercy. When she arrived at the base, it was a blood bath. The enemies didn't even expect her arrival, she slaughtered the entire base and when she left was completely drenched in blood. Internally, she was screaming in terror at what she had done. Externally, she was as calm and neutral about the entire thing as a robot would be. Even as she returned soaked in blood, she still saw the faces of everyone she killed... Men, Women.... Children. She had showed no mercy, no emotion... She did exactly what the Chinese Military wanted and she'd gotten out without so much as a scratch. The Military's harsh beatings had seemed to 'pay off' as they called it when she got back, What's worse is she was rewarded for doing it. She was given a small feast for accomplishing her mission, and from there... it spiraled out of control downward.

The Killer that killed her Family

Her next mission was far more close to home, she was tasked with going out and eliminating 6 key people. She wasn't to harm anyone else, even if they saw... She was to kill only these 6 people. She was given pictures and names too, so she could clearly identify her targets. She was to approach them, ask their names... And if it was them, she was to kill them right then and there. The first one she found quickly, It was a elderly woman probably in her late 70's or early 80's. She was with another, a much younger man. He wasn't one of her targets, however, and when she approached the old woman and discovered it was her target... She brutally murdered her in broad daylight. It was in the middle of a shopping district, she can still hear the womans screams as she raised her fist and began pummeling her mercilessly. Her blood sprayed against her, her screams and the screams of those around echo'd around her. The young man tried pulling her off, but she simply kept pounding her fist into the women until her body went limp and her head was mush. Then she simply got up and left, covered in the old womens blood. She was a cold killing machine, she cared not for human life.

Her second and third target were found out on a corn field, they were far younger.. Probably only in their 30's. As she approached, she saw a young girl move back towards the house. She knew this wasn't part of her assignment so she ignored her, none of her targets were that young. She approached the woman first, asked her name and verified it was her target. And with a single punch, slammed her hand through the girls chest and quite brutally ripped her heart out. However she didn't stop there, she began ripping the girls limbs off as well until she was nothing more than a bunch of body parts. The corn around her was soaked in blood, when she entered the house to find the husband the little girl saw her and screamed. Huáng Lóng was about to kill her, but she remembered she was ordered not too and simply walked passed her. When she found the Man, he died very slowly. She had stuffed him into his oven after knocking him unconscious and simply turned it all the way up and stuffed a chair against it so it wouldn't open and left.

Huáng Lóng's last 3 targets were all together for her... In a nice little package. It made wrapping this up very easy, Once she verified the names, she simply started by reaching forward and grabbing the first male's neck, twisting her hand to the left and snapping his neck before throwing him to the ground. The other two stared in horror as she turned to the other male, he tried reaching to punch her but she reached up and grabbed his fist. She squeezed down tightly, shattering his bones and causing him to fall to his knees. She brought her leg up and shoved him down to the ground onto his chest, twisting his arm and yanking backwards hard to rip it off. She raised it and slammed it hard into his back, shattering the mans spine. She dropped the arm before reaching down and grabbing the mans head, one hand on his chin the other grabbing a fistful of hair. She then began to twist and pull backwards until the bones made a sickening crunch as his head popped off. Tossing the head to the side, she turned to see the female running. She ran forward, catching up quickly and tripping the girl. She turned around to look at her, asking who sent her. She wasn't authorized to speak on this mission, so the girl only got a blank stare before Huáng Lóng reached down and grabbed her legs. She placed one foot on her stomach and pulled, ripping off her legs slowly and painfully one by one. The girl let out a bloodcurtling scream of agony as she did this, the ground beneath her becoming soaked in blood. Once that was finished she reached into the girls mouth, ripping her tongue out and standing over her as she watched the girl drown in her own blood. That's when it happened, Huáng Lóng smirked... She... Was enjoying this. She hadn't realized it before, but she enjoyed hearing that little girls screams at the barn... She could picture it now, seeing the little girl desperately trying to free her Father as he burned alive in front of her. Even now, this girl that was drowning in her own blood. She could've given her a swift death, instead she let her witness the death of presumably two dear friends or family before letting her slowly die. Huáng Lóng realized how sadistic she was and yet... She loved every moment of it.

Huáng Lóng heard the noise of the police officers enroute, she wasn't authorized to kill them so she had to run and so she did. By the time she returned to the Military Base news of her exploits had already gone wide spread, when she got back she was praised for her cruel and sadistic killings. She was rewarded even greater than previous this time, and this time she thoroughly enjoyed being rewarded for it. Her missions kept getting more and more gruesome, Huáng Lóng only making each killing that much more painful and long for her victims. What she hadn't realized, was those 6 people were her parents, adopted parents... and her siblings. But she didn't even recognize them, or realize who it was... and never would.

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[B]RWBY[/b] - [i]yang xiao long[/i] – @HUÁNG LÓNG

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Huáng Lóng Dec 3, 2015 21:30:04 GMT

Post by Deleted on Dec 3, 2015 21:30:04 GMT

BATTLE SKILLS

Name: Muay Thai
Class: Hand to Hand Style
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self.
Tier: N/A
Description: Muay Thai, or Thai Kickboxing, is an incredibly brutal style of martial arts that utilizes not only the hands and legs, but the elbows and knees. Because of it's brutal style, Muay Thai is a very enclosed and standalone fighting style, as most other sport fighting martial arts don't allow the use of knees and elbows, as they could be lethal, but Muay Thai tends to focus on them. Because of it's brutal nature, the secondary nature of Muay Thai is on dodging and avoiding, rather then blocking, because when within a one on one Muay Thai fight if you get hit you're usually the first one down.

Muay Thai's main source of damage is through it's brute force. While Karate can focus on singular strikes, Muay Thai walks straight through warmups and simply focuses on putting the most pressure in a snapping motion. It's stance is highly dependent on such snapping motion, and all punches, elbows, and knee attacks rely on the quick sharp movement, similar to shattering a bottle against a table. Most attacks with Muay Thai will crush bones if it hits in the correct place, and if somebody was to take a full-forced elbow to the face it would be fair to say that they would lack the nose to smell their own blood that would run down from the hit.

Lastly, the kicks with Muay Thai are probably the most renown. By using the snapping motion coupled with incredibly refined muscles in the lower hips, the users of Muay Thai have been noted to be capable of snapping anything from concrete to bones off their feet without a repercussion on their part. This is because they take the entire shock of the kick with their entire leg, rather then the flat of their foot, even if it is the piercing point. This movement of the hips and the body isn't just around kicks, either, this use of the entire body applies to all hits, which give all of the hits that sort of power that makes most power weak in comparison.

Name: Chok [Punching]
Class: Hand to Hand Technique
Type: Offensive.
Range: Self.
Tier: II
Description: Muay Thai is not called Thai Kickboxing without reason. Muay Thai is not only awarded gold for it's brutal style, but much rather it's quick pace and intense jabs and punches that come with fighting with this style. Chok is a simple use, in which the Muay Thai user enhances his own physical abilities and rather then increase the strength, increase the speed of all of his punches to a blurring speed that is hard to track even in slow motion. Each of these punches are charged, dealing extra damage, but moving at the jarring speed of a bala. The only thing is, is that the punch hurts not only the person the Muay Thai user is hitting, but the user himself unless they're wearing protective handgear.

ITEMS

REIATSU FEATURES

HUMAN POWERS

Time to Die!

Overpower the enemy (Theme)

Slams her fists together

RELEASE APPEARANCE

Eye color changes to Red

HUMAN ABILITIES

Name: Gathering Power
Class: RELEASE
Tier: III
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Gathering Power is a building up of energy once activated, every moment(post) that passes without being struck, Huáng's strength rapidly grows. Everytime she isn't struck, her strength increases by .5x, being struck doubles this increase up to a maximum of x3. Once she reaches x3 strength, Huáng is one of the most deadly combatants imaginable.

Name: Obliteration
Class: RELEASE
Tier: III
Type: Offensive
Range: 30 Meters surrounding Huáng
Description: Obliteration is Huáng's most deadly attack, by pooling energy into her arm she can strike down with tremendous force. This causes a ripple effect to erupt from underneath her damaging everything with 30 meters of her and inflicting a .5x slow for 1 post. This moves at Half-Bala speed.

Name: Concussive Force
Class: RELEASE
Tier: III
Type: Defensive
Range: 10 Meters
Description: Conussive Force sends out a shockwave around Huáng, causing any projectiles of Tier 3 or lower to become displaced. Displaced projectiles are sent awray with their trajectory, leaving Huáng unscathed. This moves at Half-Bala speed.

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Class:
Tier:
Type:
Range:
Description:

MASTERIES

HUMAN POWERS

AVERAGE

WEAPON SKILL

BEGINNER

HAND-TO-HAND

ABOVE AVERAGE

REIRYOKU TECHNIQUES

BEGINNER

HEALING
MASTERY LEVEL

SPIRITUAL POTENCY

ABOVE AVERAGE

REIATSU CONTROL

ABOVE AVERAGE

STEPPING

ABOVE AVERAGE

SOUL RESONANCE
MASTERY LEVEL

ITEM CREATION
MASTERY LEVEL

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Huáng Lóng Dec 4, 2015 1:48:22 GMT

Post by Kawaii Konge on Dec 4, 2015 1:48:22 GMT

Name: Obliteration: Needs a speed at which the shockwave travels out into that 30 yard radius.

Name: Concussive Force: Same as above. Also this needs to state that it would only work on even and lesser advantage techniques, anything with greater advantages should be strong enough to carry through, or at the very least 2 or more advantages.

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Huáng Lóng Dec 4, 2015 3:43:19 GMT

Post by Deleted on Dec 4, 2015 3:43:19 GMT

I added in the speeds, however I don't see the point for the second request since that's the very basics of all techniques that higher tier techniques will win. There hasn't been a single case that I've ever seen or heard of where that's been confusing or not known.

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Huáng Lóng Dec 6, 2015 2:06:06 GMT

Post by Kawaii Konge on Dec 6, 2015 2:06:06 GMT

After further review and a point that was brought up by some of my peers Odd I am sorry but this character is denied. I did not realize at the time of my previous late night grading that you were blatantly violating the rules by ripping a character from a series, and copying at least one if not two of her abilities directly from her youtube death battle video. This was not only an opinion of myself but also two other prominent staffers. You didn't even try to hide your rip by not changing the last name. There is a fine line between ripping and following a theme for an fc, you have not only crossed that line but done it in a bright clown suit waving a flag saying what was done. I am putting some light humor into it but this is not acceptable whatsoever, consider this your first warning. Again this is not only a decision made by myself but several other staffers.

Best advice re write the character, you will not get any of these abilities whatsoever or anything that is a semblance of them now, you shot out that chance by your rips.

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-Lyn and all of the staff team.

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